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GaeaWindsingerabout 17 years agoTenses. please stay in one tense.
You kept switching tenses, from present to past and it was very disconcerting. Pleaes Please. stay with one tense. Either make it happening right now or sometimes in the past. But remember TENSES. Stay with ONE.
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