All Comments on 'The Dark Queen'

I liked it and hope to see another chapter coming. Will the royal family find a way to break free of her spell? Don't leave us hanging! lol

Hot! Yummy!

Give us mroe!

Good story man. It might have been better if you gave us more of a story build up like you do in most of your stories, but all and all it was an awesome story.

Your stories that deal with raw sex are much better. Tryto revert to the sex type stories, more interesting and more exciting.

I love this kind of stories!(dark queen... transforming people..)

hope you'll write more like that one!

thanks!

Nice...

I like your stories..

They're evil!!

Mwuahahahah!

It's rare to find stories where the "evil" woman or in this case. The evil sorceress queen, Morticia wins in the end! I love her! hehe

I actually really enjoyed that, having been an avid reader for quite some time i have found that this is the type of story that i like, good job with the narrative i thought it was well written. Keep up the good work.

Loved this story! More please.

I love the elements of self-parody in this, with the archetypal characters and setting. Plus the legitimately arousing descriptions were awesome, very fun read, wish you would come back to writing!

That's a good story. Descriptions realistic, not a lot of repetition, good and funny (but still erotic) story. A very nice read.

Wow, awesome story! I love it! An Evil Villainess finally getting what she deserves!

Ich habe den Comic zu deiner Geschichte sehen. Kannst du bitte noch schreiben wie Vater Bruder und Mutter von der dunklen Königin verdorben wurden. Wie die Prinzessin es mit ansehen musste wie ihr Bruder seine Mutter fickte und wie dann Vater und Sohn die Königin verdorben haben. Und vielleicht noch Fortsetzung dieser Geschichte. Prima geschrieben geile Story.

I've seen the comic about your story. Can you still please write how father, brother and mother were corrupted by the dark queen. How the princess had to watch as her brother fucked his mother and then how father and son spoiled the queen. And maybe a continuation of this story. Great written horny story.

Agreed! This was the story to continue if you ever return@

Please return!!!