All Comments on 'The Darkside of Amanda Ch. 01'

Well done. Looking forward to more.

Great start!

I look forward to reading the next several chapters! This is a great start, and I expect the rest will be at least as good! Thanks!

Great start! Really appreciate that you are taking the time to develop characters that we can get to know and understand before jumping straight into action.

Really looking forward to the next installments!

agree great start can't wat for the next chapter

A good start to another fabulous story by the author. John will soon be taking control of busty Amanda.

Good start and good writing please continue.

Excellent start. I’m looking forward to more.

I wish I could ‘rate’ it.

Where are you going that you block this from the beginning?

You haven’t done this before.

So far so good. E excellent start.

Scores 4;5 in anticipation.

Good man good man

Dont take advantage...unless expressly stated to do so. Consent is hawt

I can imagine a relationship that is something similar to that in “The Awakening of a slut.” I like it.

A very good start. Writing is good and characters believable. I like.

Sorry; skipped the story.

The word is "whose" without the apostrophe!

Good character development . Wish I could rate it.