All Comments on 'The Day I Lost It With The Yard Boy'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
your asking

your asking could you forgive stupidity yes, could you forgive what she did no.

Average_WriterAverage_Writerover 13 years ago
A well written story.

However, love alone does not bring back trust or respect. What has happened can not be undone. In my view what she did is believe the worst about her husband and acted on it without any thought for her actions or her husband. The same would apply if a husband did the same thing.

Even if she now feels remorse and guilt and regrets over what she did. The deed has been done. It is far too late for regrets. Every one makes choices. She made hers and it was a really bad choice.

So in my view the wife should not be forgiven and the marraige should probably end where it is without further insult to either person. There is plenty of time for both of them to move on and find someone else.

Anyway, thanks for writing the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Educated - Yes/Smart - No

How many relationships have gone aside as a result of doubts, distrust, faulty info, meddling neighbors and friends?

These two won't get to Bora Bora and maybe knowing the truth he might try to regain his trust, only because he had loved her and married her.

Unfortunately, he would never lose the image of her with the lawn boy and in time he would, with much sadness and pain, divorce her.

Intelligence is not a guarantee of common sense...what is the saying - Trust, But Verify!

You could write a chapter 2 or Epilogue but with the description of your characters, the beauty of young love lasting a lifetime was/is now forever gone!

Thanks for a good read!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
They're over

Revenge fucks are never a good idea. What a stupid woman.

I can't see them ever getting back together. If she's so quick to allow herself to betaken by a young ass that should have had the cops called for exposing himself to her, and not leaving when she told him to. Sorry, but that's how rape starts. Yes she gave in, but he was told several times to go.

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Mousse9Mousse9over 13 years ago

There is little that is original here (then again, with cheating wife stories, everything's already been done), but it's well-written.

For some reason it is always the WIFE who jumps to conclusions, based on gossip, hearsay, or accidentally seeing her husband in the company of another woman.

In reverse, if it's the husband who hears gossip or somesuch, he ALWAYS has a PI follow his wife, bug her phone or install cameras.

I've actually never read a story where the opposite happens.

Kim was just, well, stupid and too distrusting of her husband, and too trusting of other people.

That Alan guy? An exhibitionist rapist. No means no, dude. What part of "get out of my house" do you not understand? He should've been charged with rape...

Personally, I think they won't get together. Kim has only herself to blame.

Mongo837Mongo837over 13 years ago
Hope

there is no reconcile , she refused to talk to him , she believed a load of shit without attempting to verify the truth , then she cheated ! Worse , she could be knocked up with a bastard . Good read but she deserves to go down , she doesn't even act like or even really seem to acknowledge that she did anything but a " simple " mistake out of understanding . She doesn't get it .

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
RAPE? which part of this is even remotely close to Rape?

Mousse 9 are you like Drunk?

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
dear

author , come back with a story when your women have more IQ as a vegetable and the other men more than a hard dick and the husband can say more than a rock. your line of story is always the same and it is hardly understandable that anyone finds something like this erotic. But one thing is sure your view towards 50% of people living on earth is quite troubled otherwise your stories would be a lot different.

Mousse9Mousse9over 13 years ago
No means yes?

Sign your comments, anon. Else I won't bother to reply. And no, I'm not drunk. Are you high or something?

Didja read the story? Didja read the specifics of my comment when I mentioned it?

When a woman says "no, don't come any closer, get out of my house", that means "come get me"? Why aren't you in jail already if you think like that?

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

I don't know why I read these, they are all the same. Wife jumps to conclusions, then sexes up the first man she sees, and of course then the husband catches her.

That being said I still try to see the POV of the characters. And okay Ken's low sex drive and the lunch dates look pretty bad. But then instead of Kim confronting him she jumps the lawn boy. So pretty much the basic tale of the dumb immature wife.

Don't see any hope for these two. He may forget to take out the trash and she'll jump the mailman.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Both at Fault

By both I mean Jeff should of told his wife about his condition instead of letting her jumping to the wrong conclusion. And Kim

should of confronted Jeff at the restaurant.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Follow through please

Follow-on chapters are absolutely needed here...

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Hopefully Jeff divorces the unhfaithful cheating whore and move into a realtionship with a younger, more beautiful woman that really loves him. ANd as a side bennefit Jeffs cheating whore wife either gat knocked up by the tard boy of caught AIDS from him

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 13 years ago
What will happen if she is pregnant now?

I can see where another chapter would be good to read as to what the two of them will do about their marriage.

I hope to see more and thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
lol

so when men cheat , women cheat back (fail logic or what?)

when women cheat , men go into rambo mode and torch the country

Was there EVER a man in such a story where his first thought was "I'm gonna nail that cute secretary of mine , THAT will show my wife..."

Was there EVER a women that the first thing she did was to hire an investigator to get evidence before doing anything?

Lastly , was there EVER a story where the hubby is cuckolfing his wife with multiple female asian parteneres and the fat , ugly and bad at sex wife loving it and masturbating to the thought?

Mousse9Mousse9over 13 years ago

Yanno, the anon above me is right. Was there EVER a story where the husband cheats as revenge, upon finding out his wife is cheating on him? Maybe as an afterthought, after getting revenge on the guy she cheated with. Or maybe as PART of his revenge. But definitely not the entire revenge. (Wait, didn't Harddaysknight have such a story? I'll have to go check...)

The few times I read that a woman hires a PI, is when the woman is the wife of "the other guy". And usually, upon being contacted by the cuckolded husband, conspires with him to take both cheaters down, and gives him the evidence of the PI she hired. Very formulaic.

"Lastly , was there EVER a story where the hubby is cuckolfing his wife with multiple female asian parteneres and the fat , ugly and bad at sex wife loving it and masturbating to the thought?"

That made me laugh. And actually, why IS there not such a story? I guess you'd just go "poor, poor wife" instead of "wimp husband!"...

RePhilRePhilover 13 years ago
Nice one

Well written and looking forward to the next chapter. Consider this a vote for a happy

zed0zed0over 13 years ago
Can't Wait For the next chapter

Hope he doesn't wimp out and take the slut back and gets multiple revenge fucks from his new wife that he meets in Tahiti.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Happened to a friend

A similar event happened to a friend of mine, but he was the one that cheated. His wife was a little flirty and he once saw more than there was and reacted with a common friend of theirs. The other woman told on him and shit, divorce court and the rest happened. Both were and are nice people, just weak in the trust area.

Would like to see how this story plays out and if Jeff can trust again.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

this story was good untill, he kept paying the bills and giving her money. Let be real, name one real man that would pay for anything after he caught a sstupid cheating slut?

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
It seems quite plausible

that someone could misinterpret signs around her, believe the lies of friends and risk her own marriage for a stupid act of revenge. I wonder what good would come of the revengeful act if her husband had not seen it ? How does that type of revenge benefit anyone ? How does becoming a married slut help anyone, of course it is fine opportunistic free sex for the yard boy. I like the fact that the author left the outcome of her treachery in doubt because in real life she would have this feeling of oncoming dread until there was resolution and it could last a long time.

LickideesplitLickideesplitalmost 11 years ago
Rape?

Probably, the action in this story, technically varies by venue as to whether this is a crime of rape or is not! As to whether it is 'rape' as defined by LIT, I think it is NOT! Granted, the Bull does NOT leave when asked. BUT, Sweetie had been caught admiring Bull's nudity and self-indulgence (and she knew she had been caught!) Bull did not threaten or otherwise coerce Sweetie. She did NOT try to flee the scene, and she promptly started orally pleasuring Bull when he did not leave but, instead, came up to her!

On the other hand, there is SOME reconciliation wiggle-room between what Hubby saw (and concluded) and HOW the coitus came to pass! It depends on how thoroughly Sweetie explained the situation to Hubby's Wingman (and how accurately that got conveyed to Hubby!) Whether it wiggles toward or away would be up to Hubby!

She should, I believe, write a complete account and send it to Hubby. First, she should thank Hubby for clarifying HER misinterpretations. Then state that she had a lot of emotional reactions, conclusions and aspirations for their future, but was going to leave them out of the account except for those that bore directly on the circumstances. Own up to being mad, indicate that she HAD tried to avert the contact but was conflicted and indecisive when the Bull pushed the issue.

It was NOT a case of her calling the Bull to come over and boff her until Hubby came home and saw that she could cheat, too! Or worse, that she had been doing Bull for weeks because Hubby wasn't getting the job done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
bitch

she saw red blew up and fucked up

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Just the facts

Dumb fuckin women. They trust their friends over their spouses and then they use their sorry assed emotions to come to an irrational conclusion. Then it is just another reason for revenge and to cheat. Dumb assed botch I hope he divorces her. Finish the story and Burn the bitch.

darkdance69darkdance69about 9 years ago
A realistic, but sad story

This story wasn't really erotic, but it was decently written. In my opinion the real villans of the story were the snotty, gossipy neighbor and the horn dog frat boy who was willing to destroy a marriage for a piece of ass from a distraught woman.

As a man who has been in relationships with women I can verify that they as a general rule DO react emotionally much quicker than males do. Men are methodical and logical, women tend to operate on feelings and from the heart. This is obviously a generalization, but by and large it is true. I could completely understand that she got worked up and began to have suspicions, but she should have definitely given her man the benefit of the doubt unless he had a dubious track record. She should definitely NOT have confronted him in the restaurant unless she KNEW he was cheating. That kind of situation would only have embarrassed everyone needlessly and created a hostile atmosphere that could have erupted into the police being called and everyone's reputations ruined. Stephanie would have been rumored to been a home-wrecker, Jeff a cheating dog and the wife would have been cast as a crazy, out for blood bitch.

She SHOULD have waited until Jeff got home, confronted him with her fears and the circumstancial evidence and listened to him. Since the situation of the weeks before was partially his fault he should have been willing to be willing to look at her side of the story. And if she wouldn't have jumped the gun (and the yard boy) her marriage would have been back on solid ground.

sinsational83sinsational83about 9 years ago
I guess

A;tough the story was very well written, and enjoyable to read you did one thing that always really pisses me off, like all the other authors do which is unforgivable. You left the story without any type of an ending. Do all you authors have a fixation with Alfred Hitchcock endings or did you just run out of ideas of how to finish the damn story properly ? From reading the WHOLE STORY it was actually a pretty good what there was of it. Could you not at least submit another chapter and let the readers know what the results were, at least this would make your story a better story. but again still it was a decent story. oh btw I really hope the rest of your stories aren't or don't have the same endings. PLEASE WRITE A FINISH TO THIS STORY, HELL, YOU HAVE THE TALENT TO DO IT.

jcrjl2009jcrjl2009almost 9 years ago
Husband to blame

Great story... but I blame the husband... He had issues he was working on... he had surprises he was working on... but he was not working on his marriage and he was not communicating... good for her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
uhh

Check out Facebook profile of dearbornmt@yahoo.com

Serial cheating wife exposed. Your heroine is just like her

He is fool if he takes her back. She did nothing to discourage pool boy. Gave in way too easily. She was looking for excuse to cheat, fabricated one before talking to husband.

She will do it again as she relives memory and the urge comes back

silentsoundsilentsoundover 7 years ago
Readable but

Too short.

Pretty stupid bitch.

TMSPTGR3TMSPTGR3over 7 years ago
Eh

Too short, wife too stupid to be believed, no ending. Wife acts like she ran a stop sign and totaled car.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
On to a loser

When the only thing maintaining your fidelity is the expectation of someone else doing the same, then you are onto a loser right away. You can find any excuse to cheat, based on the flimsiest of evidence, when your own morals are lacking. Only staying faithful as long as your partner does, shows that, at your core, you WANT to cheat yourself.

26thNC26thNCabout 5 years ago
So typical

Wife thinks husband is cheating, goes nuts and cucks the first guy she comes across. Oops! Husband didn't cheat? Who is sorry now? Too late. Same shitty story every time.

Jhbrown27Jhbrown27over 4 years ago
okay story

really find it hard to believe anyone would jump to such conclusions and react without specific facts.

SwordWielderSwordWielderalmost 4 years ago
What happens next?

Decent story. The only way I see them fixing this is by serious marriage counseling and a post-nuptial agreement. And it may not be possible to fix; for some people where trust is that important - this serious a breech could spell the end. At the very least their plans for having kids are put on hold for months, if not a few years.

jimjam69jimjam69over 3 years ago

Main complaint would be that there is no ending. I certainly appreciate FTDS som

inbigjimflinbigjimflover 2 years ago

no ending to story

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

But there is an ending! Trust, to him, quite rightly, is everything. She knows that and also that she has shattered it = no way back = bye bye slut = the end.

AA82ndAAAA82ndAA4 months ago

I liked the ending. She is a over reactive, dumb woman who should get a one way ticket out of the marriage.

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