by vickivale
This is very incomplete please go on thanks favorite author!
I'm excited you decided to write more on these two. There is something sexy flowing between these characters.
I have decided on a new chapter for these characters. I hope to upload it by next week. I am reading and listening to those that have contacted me personally. Thanks again for reading my first attempt at fiction and especially erotic literature. More to come soon.
A nice little story with promise!
Using the name of Batman's news photographer/ reporter girlfriend as a nom de plume is a nice touch.
Best wishes with your future endeavors!
I know you said you would Not be updating this story any time soon but you should consider doing so in the Future. this was just a "tease" of what two people can feel . It should be allowed to run its course Good or Bad.
Great start, especially for you first story. I look forward to getting to know these characters more.
Lovely first attempt, very good beginning to a great story line. Don't stop, continue this and build it up well. Looking forward to more interesting parts of this story.
Just thought I would let you know that I am going to revise this story a bit to help it flow better and to take some things I thought were overly done. It makes me smile that the way it is that you appreciate it and was able to follow along. I promise there will be more with these two just I guess you can call it...a literotica sitcom LOL. They will be back I have more to say about them and I would be remiss not to share it with you. Thanks Again. I was really surprised that my first attempt was not rejected. To my surprise it was approved and people (you) had already started reading and commenting. :)
You too must be a top chef, I have just left your table wanting more.
Very well done