All Comments on 'The Deal'

THE STORY was very hot and arousing.

please FLESH OUT..OPEN THE HORIZONS ON THE CHARACTERS.

Okay, it didn't take long for me to realize this fetish is not my thing. But your writing style and your characters are magnificent. Everything they did was to please each other. And the checking in now and then to make sure everything was okay was a nice touch. So still five stars.