All Comments on 'The Debt'

by Plautus69

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
both need shot

the fact that a man allows himself to be blackmailed into something like this is unreal. The fact the wife went along with it is even worse and then allows the other man to treat her as such and do shit like that is unreal.

8teenholes8teenholesabout 11 years ago
great work

Really well written and thought out. Your hard work really shows, you crafted a really hot tale based on an old concept. I really like where you are taking this and look forward to any future installments! Keep up the good work!

H.H.MorantH.H.Morantabout 11 years ago
Old (and very tired) story line

Completely unoriginal story line: minus two stars

Uninspired character development (characters are two dimensional and straight from Central Casting) : minus two stars

As stroke story: uninspired (reads like all the others): minus one star

The score sheet says zero, but that's not permitted, so one star is all it can get

ErotonautErotonautabout 11 years ago
The marriage is over

He's an idiot, and the moment she agreed to stay over, it was clear their relationship was spiraling into the ground.

stillaonewomanmstillaonewomanmabout 9 years ago
What?

First of all, how could a man, husband bet that much and then let the goons use her. Stupid, stupid, stupid. Something tells me Rick is going to get bored, and then the wife still won't want the husband. How could some other man tell a wife not to fuck her husband-really. Where's the fucking shotgun? I would blow him to pieces and go to jail just so she would never get him again.

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