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Ellienora35Ellienora35over 4 years ago
She leaves

He slapped her in the face too much. She’s a model. She can’t ignore that because it’s going to lose her money. He should have spanked her butt until she gave in. And she is going to pack her stuff and leave tomorrow.

She is pretty smart. She needs to take pictures of the facial bruising right away.You can get pregnant without the guy cumming inside the vagina. It would be interesting if she got pregnant and to have a DNA test from both of them. Then she would have proof of the rape and something to hold over him. It would be awesome for them to be on an equal playing field and have a real relationship by the end.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
pretty stupid

Beyond the poor pov writing that demands an editor, you have a dumbass debt collector slash drug dealer who let a punk rip him off and settles for a ten minute assault on the dudes gf? Idiotic

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

It would make more sense if he took her somewhere and put her ass to work to pay off the debt.

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