by happymuffin
For your first story, it was very good. Looking forward to more stories from you. Maybe a chapter 2
If this really was your first story, you were up for a brilliant start.
I like the way you change perspectives.
Looking forward to reading part 2.
"Damn, Ms. Lyons! You sure you were married? This feels like a virgin pussy!"
Reading this line made me so wet. Very hot story.