All Comments on 'The Deep End'

by SlutProblems

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JBEdwardsJBEdwardsover 2 years ago

Not all fathers teach their daughters how to deep throat and the nuances of copulation, but I suppose that's obvious. I like the way you wrote the story, getting inside Shelby's head, and detailing her pathetically weak hesitations about the road she was inexorably going down. I wonder how his actual daughter would deal with the situation? No surprise he's divorced! Five stars, JB

legsfeettoeslegsfeettoesover 2 years ago

Sam is a classic groomer. Shelby is being groomed. This could go so bad quite quickly. How long will it be before Shelby is turning tricks for Sam? Maybe it won't turn out like that.

WrittenByKevinWrittenByKevinover 2 years ago

this story is hot, would love a part 2 or a similar story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I believe this story is in wrong category sorry not my taste

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