All Comments on 'The Deepest Desires'

I hope she enjoyed reading this…..hot fun!

FFM threesomes belong in another section - e.g. erotic couplings or loving wives.

Loved the scenario, enjoyed the characters. There were a few errors that brought me out of the story. One of them was 'I want you to sit on my face so I can taste you'. If you're willing to have an editor, I'd be happy to help. I'm Sensei Kevin on FetLife. Looking forward to reading more of your work!