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by luckyhusband5

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Could have been hot, but......

Work on your atrocious syntax and stop changing the tense. Either stick to past or present tense; stop moving back and forth, it detracts from the story and any possible sense of the erotic.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
poor girl

If this is true I hope she got some help. And I hope those jerks didn't rape anyone else.

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