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by luckyhusband5

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
poor girl

If this is true I hope she got some help. And I hope those jerks didn't rape anyone else.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Could have been hot, but......

Work on your atrocious syntax and stop changing the tense. Either stick to past or present tense; stop moving back and forth, it detracts from the story and any possible sense of the erotic.

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