All Comments on 'The Demon Within'

by jenna147

Sort by:
  • 2 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
why would

somebody like Gina playing a role she does not even like in the first place? what is erotic about the fact she has to lie almost 24hours a day? is it an erotic turn on to fool and later on hurt everybody she knows? can't see anything positive in this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Great Story

I don't think Gina was intentionally hurting anyone. I think she is just afraid of her own desires. I thought it was a really good story, I hope to read more.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous