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Click hereI was buttoning the white dress by this point, but the fabric fell from my hands. "O-okay, w-what? Y-you were a doctor? A-are you doctor?"
Diwa walked past me toward the door with a casual, singsong laugh. "Oh no, it's Nurse Diwa now. Like I said, just give it some time. You're going to adore this place."
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoAnother story with no transition. The nurse touches the doctor's chin and she magically and instantaneously becomes a stepford zombie, who just puts the clothes on and obays.
Anonymousabout 2 years agoExcellent set up and start. Sketches of background and context, characters and plotting, tone and setting, thoughts and feelings all well done. Anxiously awaiting further humiliating developments.
satedandwaitingabout 2 years agoInteresting premise. I like the promise. A little short, but is just an initial setup chapter, so can't hold that against you.
Looking forward to reading more.
Anonymousabout 2 years agoStarted nicely with a great cliff hanger. Only, mmh, a bit too short; overall its more like a starting teaser than a convincing short story. Might turn into a wonderful story - or not.
Lets hold the horses until we know if more chapters are coming and interesting plot evolves.
