by Someoneblue
Well done.
From an erotica perspective it wasn’t necessarily sexy because there wasn’t much struggle or doubt to the mind control, since Dan and the others seemingly were overtaken quickly there wasn’t much taboo or resistance. If you wanted to add that element in the future with Becca, potentially an inner struggle, especially with the taboo, if she was possessed and fighting a growing lust.
But from a horror perspective I thought it was quite good, pretty creepy with a nice premise and well executed