All Comments on 'The Depravity Files'

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AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Holy shit, this was so good! Can’t wait for a part two!!

starfight22starfight2211 months ago

Didn't like it much

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Well done.

From an erotica perspective it wasn’t necessarily sexy because there wasn’t much struggle or doubt to the mind control, since Dan and the others seemingly were overtaken quickly there wasn’t much taboo or resistance. If you wanted to add that element in the future with Becca, potentially an inner struggle, especially with the taboo, if she was possessed and fighting a growing lust.

But from a horror perspective I thought it was quite good, pretty creepy with a nice premise and well executed

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