All Comments on 'The Descend Pt. 01'

Moshit. Cuck husband’s name described the story perfectly.

Good start

like the story so far, waiting for more

Is this meant to be called ‘The Descent’?

‘The Descend’ is non-sensical.

...and if there’s a typo in the two-word title...

Nice start. Try to include some conflict or tension into the story.

Hoping to see Mohit kneeling beside the bed while the driver plows Archana.

Please continue this story. Oh, and don't let the morality police bother you too much. Thanks for a good read.

A great start for you my friend...

Just make sure you have the other parts ready and keep it interesting!

Great start bro can't wait to read next part please dont delay it too long

Huh?!!

Randjiid yo jerking thinking of Bomb Bae farting cum on yo rice? It’s yo momma doing it, together with yo slut wife, yo sorrow pun jab sissy.

Keep going... keep on writing... miles to go for you... but u have great potential...