All Comments on 'The Descent Ch. 04'

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tryst about 4 years ago

A Full-on Five Stars

Even more fun than your other works. I'd recommend keeping up the tension between Sharon and Jim, and allowing Sharon even more deception. Can't wait to see what directions you choose.

Anonymousalmost 4 years ago

When will you add more to this story?

Hope you are feeling better. Been waiting over 5 months for more story. Any idea when more will be coming? Thanks.

Carnaleye almost 3 years ago

Absolutely fantastic story with terrific hot action between Sharon and Neveah described in the natural style.

Loved this story,

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