All Comments on 'The Descent Ch. 10'

Another hot entry. Thank you for posting this.

After many years of requests I have created a Patreon page. I just simply have not been able to afford to work on writing when my day job takes up so much of my time. My Patreon means that writing in place of working will be a viable option in my life. If you want more regular chapters and stories in the 'Girls under the influence,' 'corruption,' 'smoking fetish' and 'drug' fetish scene, consider funding my creations.

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Sharon gets so dark in this, I can’t wait for it to continue. Maybe she fines out about Amanda and Jim. Will she join them? Are there harder drugs to pursue? Wherever you go I know it will be great. You’re my favorite writer. Anticipating you next chapters is a high on its own.

you are a great writer, but these chapters, including this one, are too short; they end before they even begin! Please write longer chapters, with more sex description. Otherwise they feel like a tease, like this scene with Julian.