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All Comments on 'The Desires of the Heart'

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Jhbrown27Jhbrown27over 4 years ago
Really bad writing

A true heart burn of a story. Beyond the grammatical errors, the storyline is a mishmash Of hopelessly disconnected lines of hyperbole.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Brilliant!

Cannot remember the last time I enjoyed a story so much!

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