All Comments on 'The Devil in Her Eyes Ch. 04'

Nice round of action, in and out of bed.

This story is getting better with each chapter. I really like the way you let us read his thoughts. Waiting for more!

Inarius and Lilith at Sanctuary

Interesting and very good. I have read some others along this vein that the war between the angels and the demons was more philosophical than good fighting evil. It's a bit like real life where are religions fight each other not over whether God exists or not but how best worship him and interpret what they think God wants them do and how to serve God. 5 stars

Great story and excellent grammar and spelling (ok, so I'm fussy about those things). Bit worried that Ari sounded like Dick can Dyke in Mary Poppins or maybe Crocodile Dundee 😁. Loved the nod to A Knights Tale