All Comments on 'The Devil Made Me Do It'

Good framework for a story, but seems to be lacking a lot of details. Like the two hours with Rons kids. Thought I missed a couple of pages in the middle.

Just left me confused.

Did you start 2 different stories and decided to mash them together? Was half way decent then she walked in with a strap on out of nowhere to fuck her ex-husband wtf is that ?

Terrible and disjointed I can't tell if you had a stroke writing this or If I had one while reading it.

Strange story and certainly not incest