All Comments on 'The Devil's Inheritance Ch. 04'

You are an excellent writer! I am enjoying this story tremendously. Thank you for sharing this. Really looking forward to the next installment. Could almost hear the dah duh DAH at the end of this chapter...

I love this story... it's extremely erotic and I love how they are overcoming their initial barriers against each other. Of course, I like the bit of reluctance as well! I can't wait until the end and I'm falling in love with both of them as they fall for each other..... b

GREAT writing, please keep it up! This is the first story that's prompted me to leave a msg!!!

I especially appreciated that he asked her forgiveness. It made this story all the more sweet.

Keeps getting better and better. Love it....totally worth the wait. Keep it coming.

AHHH!!!

More sushi!

More taco!!!

Wonderful writing !

This was a beautiful, blissful, powerful chapter. You have painted the characters so well. You have background information on all the characters, even the less important ones. The background info is what makes the story believable and that much more entertaining. Beautiful piece. Thank you!

It's beautiful the way you write his thoughts, the bit about him only being a man and she his woman was just lovely. And what a cliffie! Can't wait to read more. xx

Finally James got something right... now what is he going to do with that letter

Excellent story! You seem to know quite a lot about lacing stays and Sophia's Robe a'la Francais. I have to ask, did you do a great deal of research or are you a fellow reenactor?

Wonderful...

Nice love Story. Now he has the letter and is in love with her. so there is only one possible Outcome of that or? 5 stars-.