All Comments on 'The Discipline House Pt. 01'

Very exciting, San! I always like in your work and in this one how sometimes the punishments are brief glances at another person. All very exciting to entertain the mind. In this story I liked how you purposefully used bad translations for the other language into English. Cute details of using numbers in names too. The "foreign hot sadistic land" concept you use is all very exciting since it allows for a lot of possibilities we can't have in our own world. What is the point of fantasy fiction without exploring and allowing oneself to dream of new realities?

I love these stories set in a whole society that is centered around D&S, and would love to be Renzi in this setting. Everything is so deliciously degrading. Also, I am intrigued by the AI subplot. Bravo!