All Comments on 'The Disobedient Toy :Punishment'

This is not a finished story. Surely? Author, are we being told that this is complete? It needs more punishment to be a whole story. This is acting like it's just a sample of your writing. Please finish the story.

A beautifully written story. You have a true gift as an author.

@ShadowRosie At the time that I wrote the story i believed myself done with it but ..... i think i might add on or at least post a second part