All Comments on 'The Display'

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MrWhiteTigerMrWhiteTigerover 12 years ago
Good One

Nice job of setting the scene, establishing a great rhythm to the story, and finishing with a great climax.

:-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
My ship has cum in.

This display had me spent!

tourdelancetourdelanceover 12 years ago
Historical Fucktion

I liked the historical setting and how the story is a cross between submission and exhibition genre. Why didn't we ever discuss this stuff in history class?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Hot story

Your ship story rocked my boat! More please...

gpetagpetaabout 4 years ago

hot turn of an innocent wife in public

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I would of loved boob sucking as that is a huge turn on. Also, no mention of nipple squeezing!! Bummer!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I want to know what he whispered in her ear…

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Most women LOVE to have their tits sucked. This story just has them grabbed and not once licked! That would of made this story much better for sure! More boob sucking, please!!!

FrivolousFrivolous27 days ago

Fantastic story. So gripping and primal. I love it.

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