by oopsydaisy
Nice job of setting the scene, establishing a great rhythm to the story, and finishing with a great climax.
:-)
I liked the historical setting and how the story is a cross between submission and exhibition genre. Why didn't we ever discuss this stuff in history class?
I would of loved boob sucking as that is a huge turn on. Also, no mention of nipple squeezing!! Bummer!!
Most women LOVE to have their tits sucked. This story just has them grabbed and not once licked! That would of made this story much better for sure! More boob sucking, please!!!