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- The Divide
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Click here"Terrin...I can't last much longer." He whispered.
"I'm almost there..." Terrin kissed his ear. Zan thrust into him one last time and grunted. He felt his balls empty into Terrin's tight ass and his lovers release spray across their stomachs. Terrin moaned and hugged Zan tighter. The
couple relaxed and Zan moved them so that he could spoon against Terrin.
"Say it." Zan whispered.
"Say what?"
"Say the words I want to hear." Zan moaned in his ear.
"I don't know-"
"Yes. You do." Zan whispered again.
"I-I..." Terrin hesitated, and
then finally realized that he did believe the words.
"I love you, my mate." Terrin whispered. Zan felt tears spill from his eyes for the second time that night. It was the most beautiful thing he'd ever heard. The words he had prayed to hear for a year and seven days."And I you mate. Forever. Now, let's rest."
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 5 years agoThe story was good overall but the formatting could use some work. The dialogue was a bit cheesy at times but generally pretty good. My biggest issue which is just personal preference is that dragons could turn human. I just personally dislike that trope as it makes dragons less special as well as the fact that I find dragons much more attractive then people so I prefer that hot dragon on human action vs the human on human action you chose. But great job nonetheless keep it up.
Anonymousover 5 years agoGweall, I have read all your stories on this site. I still think this is one of your best. It always reduces me to tears. No disrespect to your other stories, but this one does it for me. Thank you xxx
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poreyb1999almost 7 years agoThis is probably my third time reading this story and each time is like the first, the characters are so life like (even if some are dragons). I would love to see a second part to this.
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoIt's my second time reading it, and it's just as great as the first. It just draws you in. Now I'm left obsessing over whether other dragons will find their mates in humans, and if they will ever find a way to bring back the nearly extinct clan.
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoI wasn't sure what this was going to turn out to be when I started reading it but I couldn't pull myself away and loved every minute of it. Thank you!
Anonymousover 8 years agoGweall , you are one of my favourite authors on this site and you throw out a quickie story like this , whilst continuing your other main stories. Wow. What an imagination you have. Hats off to you my friend. Keep writing. Just loved this story.
simonjessex@Hotmail.com
tendermentsalmost 10 years agoOne shot my ass.... Why are you leaving us with so many questions? Is their future bright or is it tragic
canndover 10 years agoI saw it come up on comments and took a look at which story it was and decided to read it again. I loved this one and was only left with one question....will poor Zan be left alone at the end of Terrin's short life or will his life be extended by being mated to a dragon? Great story. Hope you're well G!
Lavonyaover 10 years agoThis is thee longest one-shots I've /ever/ read!!!
It is also one of the /BEST/ and most detailed stories I've read so far!!!!
