All Comments on 'The Divine Gambit Ch. 07'

Honestly the idea of having soul mate, played out, is pretty awesome. Even if it's basically a burden here.

Agree with James_Duncan about character, although as well as tiring I'd add irritating and pathetic.

He defintely needs to start realising that he isn't responsible for other people's feeling, his self flagelation is starting to get a bit tiring

Totally agree with laad4e08. The Guy Who Doesn't Want to Presume character can be annoying. But this is a great story with excellent world building.

I'm really enjoying this I am looking forward to the rest of it

I really love this story! I wish our "Hero" was a little quicker on the uptake and just get on board and stop all the self loathing.

Please have him embrace having a harem and get on with it.

Thank you for sharing.