All Comments on 'The Divorcee’s Ass'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

The English is good, so is the writing style and you definitely are much better than the average Indian writer you find here. But the stories are getting predictable and boring now. You should start exploring different themes, plots and scenarios. You should be writing longer stories where the sex is integral to but not the sole purpose of telling your tale. Then you will have a better chance of your stories earning the red 'H' tag.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Poorly written.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

They're always a "hottie", no average round hipped slightly pudgy women are worthy of being seduced I guess.

chytownchytownover 1 year ago

****Would have been a better read if she had not been drunk at the beginning. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Non consenting sex

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