by perineyum
The English is good, so is the writing style and you definitely are much better than the average Indian writer you find here. But the stories are getting predictable and boring now. You should start exploring different themes, plots and scenarios. You should be writing longer stories where the sex is integral to but not the sole purpose of telling your tale. Then you will have a better chance of your stories earning the red 'H' tag.
They're always a "hottie", no average round hipped slightly pudgy women are worthy of being seduced I guess.
****Would have been a better read if she had not been drunk at the beginning. Thanks for sharing.