All Comments on 'The Divorcee's Club #01'

by maidenlefoy

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
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You are a tease to the extreme with only one page of story. Please release the next chapter soon.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Good Story Line, Needs Editing

I like the guy with three divorcees trying to out-fuck each other. Keep it up.

Though you should get some editing help because you need to delete the numbered plot points and correct some grammar and spelling errors.

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