All Comments on 'The Doctor Ch. 01'

The story seemed to just go rambling on mixing different parts together.

... a real doctor would have not forgotten at least not completely, OB or not. ;-)

Ummm... at the end, I think they had sex, but not much detail. Instead, there was half a page of hotel hopping and such and no play. Sorry, but that was confusing and kind of lost my interest. Maybe you could try to fill in the details and connect things up better as the idea and effort was intriguing.