All Comments on 'The Doctor of Desire'

For a first this is just fine. A fantasy of the author?

If this is Your first It is out of this world. Please write more to it.

I would like the author to continue with this story, maybe going back and explaining what has taken place in the past.

I can see a very good submissive story and

April could made to be a very good little slave, if not that radical, at least a very good lover. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us....Rich