All Comments on 'The Doctor Pt. 01'

Now gthat's something new! I love the humor underlying every line (no pun intended.... or is it?)

You need to better research when writing a story. An Endoscopy is s procedure that is done through the mouth not the anus. Putting a scope up the ass is a colonoscopy

Anonymous: Actually, an endoscopy can be oral or anal.

It is a hot story, too. It was funny, when the young cop imitates the dog. :)

This is a great story. I love the way it starts the best. 2 modest 18 year old guys being well behaved, and the doctor makes quick work of them and their friends. They didnt even get the chance to catch on or organize a single thought. Cant wait for another chapter or 20.