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SplitPeachSplitPeach5 months ago

I like where this is going, look forward to the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Great start

EroticFrictionEroticFriction5 months agoAuthor

Thank you SplitPeach and Anonymous! Next chapter has just been published, and I hope to have the third up here in a few days.

DoortotheDoortothe5 months ago

Excellent writing. Great vocabulary and excellent description of sexual acts. Also love the mystery. I can’t help but be intrigued. Looking forward to more

EroticFrictionEroticFriction5 months agoAuthor

Thank you Doortothe, I really appreciate the feedback, and I'm very glad you liked it.

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Coming back to writing, and what better way to shake the rust off than to write smut! My goal is to write story and character driven filth; I know I have a long way to go but at least it'll be fun getting there. Update (04/10/24): Just uploaded Chapter 5 of The Dollhouse, it...

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