by Mastrbull
The character development and details keep my attention piqued and engaged. Please continue submitting these chapters!
Watersports just isn’t one of my kinks, it could just be my interpretation but the way this chapter was written made me wonder if this relationship is headed towards the TPE route? That’s too intense for me, I’m happy to carry on reading for now.
The way you’ve written these first two chapters has readily made the characters believable it grabs the attention of the reader.
Tess (UK)