All Comments on 'The Doomsday List'

Some authors are so hellbent on repeating the same tired tropes, that they don't bother thinking if they even make sense. Here we have the overdone trope of the father being civil and kinda mellow towards his horrid daughters. Author probably forgot that said daughters, not only supported their mother's sluttiness, but also actively condoned pedophilia in front of him. Any decent human being would completely cut off that filth from his life, not tell them to find him if they ever change their mind...

He needs to write off the two 2 cunts he called his daughters. They will be a waste of skin and time, the rest of their whore lives. Turning on your father is a capital offence. Supporting a mothers slut plan means he needs to cut them

Out of his life. Let them work the streets for money

The author needs to delete the trope file.

NO FATHER would tolerate his daughters betrayal and certainly never forgive it.

Other than that thus was a pretty clever story!

Similar to a story I wrote but yours was better. 5*****

With reference to the commenta about th daughters. I agree that both these girls have the morals, or lack, of an alley cat. If not already, they are lying and cheating sluts in evolution. That they are depraved is a disservice to the word.Clearly both have no respect,and less live, for their dad.

Note here too, Dec. 2023, that the wife's moral posture is selfish sexual entitlement corresponds exactly with today's Toxic Feminism.

Loose ends abound the ending seemed way too rushed.

This is our new reality, women raise their daughters to be whores. Selling access to their bodies for dinners , drinks and trinkets. The. They brag about how powerful and independent t they are, while sucking a cock in a parking lot. NO thanks.