All Comments on 'The Dress Shop'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
So damned good!

Wow that was so sexy! It may have started as non con but it rapidly moved from that straight into Reluctance and right into CNC, yum! A seriously breathtakingly erotic story.

A minor issue is, there’s a vast distance between sucking a cock and trying to suck a dildo, in all honesty you’d have a better chance at deep throating a large cock than a medium or even a small dildo. The other odd thing was the narrative, why not just write it from Sue’s pov? It made it more difficult to read from a 3rd party perspective.

Still I LOVE the story concept, it was off the charts hot!

Tess (UK)

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