by KaddyKitten
Great story so far. Please don't leave us hanging. The ending in your mind must be fantastic. Share it with us, please. When you have time, keep writing more stories.
I really enjoyed both chapters. I will be looking daily for the next chapter. It is very well written and has appeal for both male/female. Some stories are very one-sided and this is not.
This fic is absolutely beautiful. I loved how honest they were, and they both feel like real people. I liked that she admitted how uncomfortable some of the things made her, and she wanted to be pushed, but valued. Just wonderful. Please write more!
You have laid out a great story line and I like both characters. Please keep writing more!