All Comments on 'The E-club'

by CalDreamer

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ErotonautErotonautabout 16 years ago
Hot stuff!

One of the hottest tales I've read for a long time - got me hard pretty much from the get-go - and I can't wait to read more of your material. The way you built up the tension, fleshing out the characters, made for a really intense experience. Top marks!

ExoManiExoManiabout 16 years ago
Very Original

Great story. I hope there's a follow up story about that "other club".

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Really creative and hot

I loved the fact that you built the characters and let them evolve in the club. My minds eye saw both their naked flesh and their excitement. Thanks.

bottovarnisbottovarnisabout 2 years ago

fun! great story. The plot was fast paced and hot from beginning trend. Thank you.

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