by CalDreamer
One of the hottest tales I've read for a long time - got me hard pretty much from the get-go - and I can't wait to read more of your material. The way you built up the tension, fleshing out the characters, made for a really intense experience. Top marks!
Great story. I hope there's a follow up story about that "other club".
I loved the fact that you built the characters and let them evolve in the club. My minds eye saw both their naked flesh and their excitement. Thanks.
fun! great story. The plot was fast paced and hot from beginning trend. Thank you.