All Comments on 'The E-club'

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bottovarnisbottovarnisover 2 years ago

fun! great story. The plot was fast paced and hot from beginning trend. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Really creative and hot

I loved the fact that you built the characters and let them evolve in the club. My minds eye saw both their naked flesh and their excitement. Thanks.

ExoManiExoManiover 16 years ago
Very Original

Great story. I hope there's a follow up story about that "other club".

ErotonautErotonautover 16 years ago
Hot stuff!

One of the hottest tales I've read for a long time - got me hard pretty much from the get-go - and I can't wait to read more of your material. The way you built up the tension, fleshing out the characters, made for a really intense experience. Top marks!

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