by CalDreamer
fun! great story. The plot was fast paced and hot from beginning trend. Thank you.
I loved the fact that you built the characters and let them evolve in the club. My minds eye saw both their naked flesh and their excitement. Thanks.
Great story. I hope there's a follow up story about that "other club".
One of the hottest tales I've read for a long time - got me hard pretty much from the get-go - and I can't wait to read more of your material. The way you built up the tension, fleshing out the characters, made for a really intense experience. Top marks!