All Comments on 'The Education of Jeremy Blake Ch. 089'

fucking, piece of fucking work

Our world would be a better place if all families had the ritual of this family. Very good story...

You wrote eight other chapters of this crap?

Great series - loved the attention to detail!

After trying to read through chapter 1 of this tale, I gave up on it as it was obviously headed toward some insane 'Boy Toy In Bondage' bullshit. Normally, I don't give a shit what folks use to get their nut, but this was just a collection of crap. Here, let me prove it. Read some of this authors tales: http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=868670&page=submissions

His stories depict open-loving-sharing relationships without all the D/s bullcrap. All I know is that I would rather have love freely given to me than have to rip it out of someone.

But, this story was too long drawn out and more disgusting than titillating to me. It was not up to your other stories, however, I do appreciate your effort in writing this epistle, it just is a matter of personal preference, not a real criticism. Please keep writing.

I sure hope you will continue this story line I lost count how many times I have cum from you our story.

the way you write is so very structured that the story feels very contrived and stilted.