All Comments on 'The Egg of Immorality Ch. 08'

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Looselyhuman about 2 years ago

Seriously, Artesia's big secret is that she's...voluptuous? So much build-up.. I hope there's more to it than her being ashamed of her femininity -- but, also, generally speaking, why ruin petite athletic rogue elf bodies with big boobs and hips? Meh all around.

Also really not looking forward to Jenna being gang-raped by kobolds. You haven't gone there yet but you haven't set up a situation like this either. Fingers crossed.

bhojo over 1 year ago

Trust in the author that Jenna will be okay but the suspense is tough....

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