All Comments on 'The Elevator'

Disgusting, sexist garbage.

Erotic and all too human! No shame, young lady, no shame!

Have Lit's standards fallen this far?

Loved it!

Hopefully next time he will wank all over your luscious tits in the elevator!

Only suggestion: include a warning at start of your story to stop those who hate our fetishes from reading it then leaving dumb comments.

I liked it :) please continue the story!

I liked this and its a fantasy, if its not to your taste do not read it.

I love pee play.. This little pee tale makes my cock throb.. With my partner, we often switch roles.. I also love sexy women who smoke cigarettes when we're entertaining our piss fantasies..

you're an amazing writer, keep this work up, you know it's not just guys who enjoy reading such naughty stories;) This kind of treating gets me wet really quick. right meow you pleased me very well .

It's not about the piss. It's about the submission.

This is not just a fantasy. It happens, all the time. And it is very nicely described in this story. I do look forward to other stories of sexy, nasty submission. The smirk alone tells volumes. Her humiliation is known to many, or everyone; and she loves it.

Great story, well written