All Comments on 'The Elf and the Princess Pt. 01'

by Katie789

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good for first story but why so short. Why has this site turned into nothing but short and shorter stories? No details, no actual plot,; just meet and have sex. Am I asking for too much?

Katie789Katie789over 1 year agoAuthor

I would love feedback as this is my first post

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

That is was a great start and I hope to see them grow as a couple

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Enchanting.

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