All Comments on 'The End of Evil Ch. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
i cried

Oh I was so happy when I checked today and saw that u had put up another chapter thankyou. It was just beautiful. Please continue.

GimletEdgeGimletEdgeover 12 years ago
An exceptional chapter in this moving voyage.

As Bob includes Junie this time in his work with Donna, the reader can see much more about the relationship between dom and sub. This time Junie could share the experience instead of feeling closed off, equivalent for her to punishment without explanation.

I suspect we are also seeing Bob's continuing effort to prepare Junie and Donna for the trial.

Beautifully done.

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