All Comments on 'The End to a Very Bad Day Ch. 02'

This was an arousing read, I hope you keep writing. I can't decide if I enjoyed this part or the first part more. The chemistry between your characters is very realistic (made me miss my ex) and it was beautifully paced. Thank you

Thank you everyone. I just saw that this story became HOT.

Thanks for voting, and I love reading your comments. Keep 'em coming.

brilliant second part love it and the writing of it with out doubt you do know how to get your readers hard and very horny with you awesome story writings the end to a very bad day

but was it no it was very exciting more

Thanks skabowl, I'll let you know when the next story is out. You better have voted too, or I'll POUNCE on ya!

Ok ok............. so all you single guys out there...... I only wish she was my wifey......but alas......... but on the positive side.. we do call each other that.........and yes wifey..you have done a wonderful job on the story......... entrancing, captivating, sensual and erotic....... and gets better with every read :-)

Sorry folks, there was an authors note that said you should read the first story before this one, but it didn't get posted at the top of the story.

I know some asked for a longer story, but this one was short and sweet, I'll try for a longer one next time. I promise.

Constructive criticism is always welcome, but I found a way to delete the cruel/mean ones. So think about what you type first.

Oh and don't forget to vote.

I liked the first one and this did not disappoint me as the second, it was just a s good if not better.... well thought out and paced......

Having someone who doesn't mind how you get them off is a treasure.

Love the washing in the shower.

Personally would have used some ties and nipple clamps in the bedroom.

And importantly, I can cook.