All Comments on 'The Entity Pt. 02'

I'm not understanding part of the story, but I'm so hooked it's not funny...waiting to the next chapter to appear. I'm dying to know who is "the entity."

Intriguing! This is shaping up as quite the detailed story, the plot is deep and has many facets. I have a idea about possible directions, but expect some twists to happen. It’s got my attention- nice job of grabbing the reader.