All Comments on 'The Equilibrium Deviance Ch. 01'

Very Good Story I Hope You Keep It Going

That was a fun read, hope to see more...

Love the you're doing with the story, hope Powergirl gets caught too... Epic female orgy? ;o

Hot sex, intriguing plot. I'd hate to see this one die...

I'm with the last anon. Great, sex, great story. Just needs some more Power Girl.

I was initially disappointed that Power Girl wasn't involved in this chapter, but scene and the swerve at the end more than made up for it. Great sex scene, fantastic writing (as is the norm for your projects, in my opinion), great story. Keep this one going.