All Comments on 'The Ex-Girlfriends Across the Hall'

Don't end the story line, it's really well written and fun to read !

I hope this is not the end. If so what a major disappointment. This could have been a inspiration to those of us with peculiar anxiety. Please do not let it end this way

With Sly fucking him, right?

I have enjoyed this series of stories. I hope the Girl friends and Sly return.

Sylvia should be good with having her clit rubbed ,but not till sh cums ... and yes, Sly should be with Chris also ..

This was the most engrossing story segment I've read in a long time. I can't remember the last time I felt such an intense desire to see how a story resolves.

The development of the characters was at first novel, but with this chapter the two people most at the centre of this story were asserted in a touching way. The assertion that Sly's life is ultimately still tragic, even as this story is three chapters into its erotic content, was bold, and exactly how this story needed to go.

I can't wait for the next installment, assuming we get one. I'm hoping that whatever happens, Sly himself gets what he truly deserves.

Brilliantly written. Horribly real. Please create a light, and a tunnel for the light to be at the end of.