All Comments on 'The Experiment'

One of the most original stories I've read here. Excellent writing and exceptional illustrations. Worth at least 6 stars

This was dumb. Don't waste your time on anything else.

Splendid

Really excellent illustrations, best I've seen, but I hate cheating stories. Sorry.

Great illustrations, great twist of an idea, what's not to like.

Best Artwork ever!

That is what the Illustrated section should look like.

I have been perusing this site for years and IMO, this was the best, even better than silkstockinglover (probably my favorite author till now). Great job!! Both the narrative and the drawings were exceptional and awesome. Thank you!

nice. what software did you use to create the images?

Intrigued by the concept of this story. I enjoyed reading the story. The illustrations of the act of sexual pleasure are excellent.

Keep writing!

the bar has been raised.. great job

Fabulous! Best illustration yet!

Thanks so much for all your positive comments! I'm touched.

I created the images with 3DS MAX, Corona Render and a little Photoshop. The settings were modelled by me and the figures were adapted off-the-peg models.

I've written and read a lot of erotica, and this is far better than anything I've ever done or read before. The illustrations are extraordinary, but it is the writing that puts it over the top. This will stand as my favourite erotic story for a long time.

I can only imagine how long it took you to put this together. The artwork melds with the story better than any other illustrated story I've read. I can tell you put a lot of effort and work into it. I wish I could give you better than 5/5.

Brilliant!

The illustrations really added to the story. I liked the pubic hair (very appropriate) on the female characters when it was present. This made it more real than those stories alleging a smooth pussy when it's nothing more than a silly razor burnt mess of pimples oozing out puss the next day after a shave and orange blood if quickly re-shaved to get rid of the flaking razor skin and to clip off the just formed the pimple heads (It's just Nasty) and some ladies, seriously think there are guys who like and want to eat something that looks like that. You did well with your illustrations. (5) rating!

Brilliant, more please

5/5

This is my first 5 star in several years ! The photography is extraordinarily well done ! In my estimation it will be sometime before it is topped.

O. My. God. That was the weirdest, most confusing, and hottest story I've read on this site, bar non. The illustration's sometimes slide into the uncanny valley ( or the plastic-y valley) as software illustrations are always in danger of doing, but they are still better than 99% of the stuff out there. The sequence of Pearl's face as she gets more and more turned on is a textbook case of how this should work at its best. The huge number of them shows the effort you put in.

I had a lot of trouble keeping straight who was real and who was a dream fantasy--which I'm pretty sure you intended. The ending was very satisfying--if I got it right, the couples finally merged and their rational and their passionate side integrated. Or as Nietzsche would say, the Apollonian and the Dionysian. Or to be less nerdy, as the Skin Horse would say to the Velveteen Rabbit, "When you are loved, then you become real."

A challenging real but well worth it.

love it looking at those big cocks and balls

being Gay i love the illustrations.that show cocks and balls going in ass's ,,wish there would be more Gay illustrations here that make me hard and cum

Sensational art. Splendid writing.

Wow.... just wow....